Haiku: About Winter

This is my first haiku in the class.
冬風にマフラーを巻く真っ赤な手
In the winter wind,
Wrapping the scarf,
With my bright red hand.
季語:冬風 (for winter)
Commentary:
In this haiku, I tried to describe a simple scene, in which I wrap my scarf due to the cold wind.